Five Minutes.

by oh amanda on January 14, 2011

in writing

There’s a picture on my camera I want to tell you about. I’m going to write about it for five minutes.

Ready?

Set!

Go!

food coloring snow

I didn’t want to go outside again. It’s too cold and I’m too warm-blooded to want to wrap up the kids in layers and plastic baggies and hats and gloves and boots. (Or maybe I’m just too lazy?)

So, we put water and food coloring inside a squirt bottle. I wrote the kids’ names in the snow to their squeals of delight. Then it was their turn. I let Asa hold the squirt bottle of blue while Lydia did a spray bottle of purple. I wish you could feel their excitement–doing something that feels, I don’t know, maybe wrong? Throwing splashes of color on the vast bright whiteness?

Asa’s little body in his Buzz Lightyear pajamas–not knowing at all what we were doing, but still wanting to be involved. Just letting the water drip, drip, drip out of the end. His little pants leg pushed up on one side. His body in a squat.

And Lydia, the busy big sister bee. She wants the squirt bottle, she wants to make a smiley face, write her name and help Asa all at the same time. She’s squealing with delight while greedily eyeing her brother’s dye bottle.

And I’m going to another door, to peek my camera out. To look and see what else I can see. To get a new view of my children. To capture a moment that we might see every year from now on. Or maybe never see again.

It surprises me the emotion of small moments. The longing I have in each moment while they revel with their head-first, full-on  abandon.

Yeah, I wish you could have felt their excitement.

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STOP.

That was it. My picture in 5 minutes. Your turn. Can you write for 5 minutes straight? Bring us into a picture? Bring us into a brief moment of time? Try it! Then link up to the sparkling Gypsy Mama!

{confession: I looked at the clock only once–when it was 20 seconds to the end. And I did go back and add “in the snow”. That’s all. Whew, I feel better!}

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Lisa-Jo @thegypsymama January 14, 2011 at 9:10 am

“It surprises me the emotion of small moments.” -yes, me too. I think that’s often the amazing heart of motherhood. How watching one’s kids do the simplest tasks can just sock you in the gut.

I loved this word picture! For me it was especially the detail of Asa’s one pajama leg all pushed up that really wormed the image up into my heart. That vulnerability of a child and their oblivion to their surroundings, their clothes, the cold, when they are entranced by something.

So beautiful Amanda.

Oh and I am totally stealing the idea of the food coloring spray bottles! Brilliant!
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oh amanda
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January 14, 2011 at 9:34 am

Thank you! That’s what I was hoping to show in those 5 minutes–the stark differences of kids/adults in their interaction w/the world. Don’t you wish we had a little more of their wild abandon and oblivion?

Again, I LOVE this prompt. So fun!
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JessieLeigh January 14, 2011 at 9:36 am

Oh, I just love that little hiked up pant leg! Love that you drew attention to it.. it’s THOSE details that just make a moment, in my opinion. (And also, um, how brilliant of you to let them “play outside” while staying toasty warm!)
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oh amanda
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January 14, 2011 at 10:28 am

Brilliant! I’ll take it! :)
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Mela Kamin
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January 14, 2011 at 10:40 am

That’s it, isn’t it? “To capture a moment that we might see every year from now on. Or maybe never see again.” Beautiful and adorable. We’ve done this too and even as a Midwesterner, I sometimes dislike the bundling and unbundling of little ones for snow play.

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Louise
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January 14, 2011 at 11:20 am

Oh the cleverness of figuring out a way to enjoy the snow that does NOT involve millions of layers (followed five minutes after getting them all on by “Mamma, I have to go POTTY!”). Such simple joy, such fullness of life to be found in these small creatures!

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Jennifer January 14, 2011 at 12:14 pm

That is the neatest idea I have ever seen. I can’t wait to be back in Tennessee (praying it snows) next winter and try that. Your words really captured the moment. I loved how you said you peeked though another door to get another view of your children. Precious times.
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Loni January 14, 2011 at 1:54 pm

Ohhhh, if as mama’s we would only stop to capture more of the emotions of small moments. Thank you for sharing. Precious!
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sidnie
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January 14, 2011 at 3:51 pm

Those small moments, the ones I usually take for granted, are always the one I remember or the ones I capture in blurry pictures that become my favorite.
I can feel their excitement, through your words.
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oh amanda
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January 14, 2011 at 3:53 pm

True–the blurry pics can be the ones that you HAD to have regardless of camera skills! :)

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Zee January 14, 2011 at 5:12 pm

that’s a great idea for a fun snowy day! and that’s a cute picture :)
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Sarah
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January 14, 2011 at 5:25 pm

Oh what a fun and sweet idea! I’m sure they loved every minute!
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Miranda
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January 14, 2011 at 5:31 pm

Brilliant idea! Being a mom sure brings out the creativity in us :) .

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Lenae January 14, 2011 at 7:54 pm

Oh, I agree with all of the previous commenters: What a genius idea! Definitely tucking that one into my arsenal ;)

I also love the way you captured the sheer fun and delight of the moment, especially your little boy’s scrunched up jammie leg — adorable!

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Beth January 15, 2011 at 8:57 pm

I’m a grandma who doesn’t get to watch the children as much as I would like. I work full time as a high school English teacher and deal with a chronic illness, so although my son and wife give me plenty of opportunities, I can’t always say yes (not nearly as much as I’d like to).
We had the 5 yr. old grandson this weekend and he and I ended up the afternoon with playdough. It was so cool to see how he took the same molds and tools in the kit as his 3 yr old sis did last summer and use them totally differently. The look on his face when he was being silly with a spaghetti tool (the dough comes out in spaghetti like strands) was priceless—his words and sounds and lively gestures and expressions—all made up a ‘small moment’ I captured on camera and will cherish forever.
I still have those moments with my grown up kids–an unexpected laid back conversation when they freely express what’s on their minds and in their hearts. I learned long ago to drop everything and capture that moment esp. when they were teen-agers.
I really enjoyed your idea and the photo was precious. That could have been two of my grandkids ( I have 5 and one on the way)! Wonderful post. :)

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Sara Hickman January 18, 2011 at 12:16 pm

What a great post. I had to go back and look at the picture a couple times. I am lucky enough to be able to be working from home with our little girl. I don’t miss any of her firsts. I am so excited to see the more and more of these types of times.

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Melissa~
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January 21, 2011 at 1:59 pm

You are such a great writer Amanda. :)

Melissa~

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